I opened the doors and stepped out on the balcony. The view was amazing, but it was the air that almost took my breath away
This week’s Friday Fiction Writing Prompt is all about comparison. It’s time to compare one thing to another. The prompt focuses on fresh air. Our narrator has arrived at a place where the air is different from what they are used to. This could be because they are from a smog-ridden city and they are now at the coast or out in the countryside, or the other way round. The choice, as always is yours.
The aim is to stretch your descriptive powers by focussing on the differences between the two. Use simile and metaphor, exaggerate. The bigger the difference between the two places, the narrator’s memory and their current experience, the more captivated your reader will be, and the more likely they might relate to one of your descriptions.
As always, no rules, just write and have fun.
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